Notre Dorm
I'll never drink or sleep around
The skylarks sing, the flowers bloom
I promise I will clean my room
I'll study hard, I'll eat my beans
And skip all those explicit scenes
I'll... help... all... those... poor... souls... in... need...
Oh damn! I think I'm out of weed!
Disclaimer: This poem rests upon my observation of certain friends and various classmates. The only substance I abuse is chocolate.
Labels:
Poetry,
Sententia Profundus
17 comments:
Sounds like my close friend in Engineering.
This one tickled me funny bone. ;)
ha ha.. good one. the disclaimer.. not so good.
Trippy! Ha!
On a more serious analytical note, the length of the poem was perfect. Just enough to go what the .. BOOM. Well done.
brainhumour,
:P if I had a penny for every person who was reminded of an old college friend after reading this....
Moriarty,
What do you have against chocolate? :P
Harish,
:) Thank you. I rather like the thought of having a poem go BOOM!
Perfetto, Just the way I like them - short & perky.
Very introspective, to the point of me doubting the verity of the disclaimer :P
My dear walrus, I thought it was the girls you preferred short and perky. Your idea of the perfect poem is one written in invisible ink. :P
Whatever makes you think I was referring to anything else ? :)
@"short and perky" - LoLling like an adolescent at possibly subtle reference to things adolescents lol about.
Walrus, Harish,
To an adolescent, the world is one big innuendo, isn't it? :P So what's your excuse?
And the wise men from the mountains can file criminal charges against your chocolate abuse!
Lovely!! :P
I love such short poems. Good for my conscience since I dont have to skip anything.
I loved this poem.
Ghost Rider,
No wise man would dare incur the wrath of a chocolate deprived woman. :P
Priya,
Thank you. :) Glad you like it.
Rusty
Well the bit about studying hard makes my conscience prickle plenty. :P
good one!
Hehehe.
SKYLARKS sing in your poem. Hence, iLike! xP
I remember this one. A classic.
Glad to see you're still writing. :)
Matangi Mawley,
Thank you, and welcome to Pixie Dust. :)
Lucid Darkness,
You're fond of skylarks? I rather think the simile does you justice. :P
Panned Peter,
Thank you. From you? That's praise I'll treasure. :)
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